Bianca Marais

That's too vague.

this could be anything from her upbringing isn't as blue, but as they thought to she had an affair.

One of the children isn't,

Billy's like our minds just going in so many places.

I think we have to nail this down, especially because you are so good at telling us all the juicy stuff earlier on, like the daughter struggling to give up her ambitions for a fiance, the son dropping out of college.

So the fact that you drop all of that information, you don't tell us what Melody's big lie is.

I'm a little bit confused by that.

Obviously, probably something to do with the climax and you're trying to save us.

I wonder, this is an example.

I always say this, but I love when authors are on the show because I get to ask them what the thing is because I do want to know what this thing is.

But other than that, it's really strong.

I would totally request the pages.

All right.

So we have a prologue that is not a prologue, but we know it's a prologue.

We start with Iris, who is the other woman.

It starts in her point of view, where there's a line that says, Iris Milton knew she was the villain of the story.

And it just explains how her and the male character, Billy, met.

Yeah, he came into the diner that she served him.

It's not super clear.

This probably could be argued, but it sounds like he paid for an apartment for her, a car.