Carly Watters

How to begin your story in the best place and in the best way.

I created this course after studying hundreds of books.

I've mapped out elements that are present in the beginning of all successful novels and memoirs.

And I've designed checklists, actual checklists, that you can use to ensure that your story's beginning is seducing your reader.

we'll cover how to write a great first line different types of beginnings and how you can choose the best one the best place to start and the best way to start yes these are totally different things when it makes sense to add a prologue and when it doesn't how to frame your inciting incident in an appealing way

how to balance exposition and mystery, how to include context but not weigh it down with too much backstory, and what to do if your story has more than one POV or timeline.

Most of all, I'm going to show you how to make readers want to turn to chapter two.

Join me for this multi-day course designed to help you break through the noise.

You'll leave with a clear, actionable breakdown of exactly what goes into a terrific beginning.

If you've already signed up, come prepared to take lots of notes.

We're talking hundreds of slides with real-world examples and specific techniques, plus a super fun surprise that I can't wait to share.

I hope to see you there.

What's up, everyone?

This is Cece.

So I recently grabbed lunch with an acquiring editor from HarperCollins who told me that the number of submissions she's been getting has nearly doubled.

And I wasn't surprised at all because every agent and editor I know has been talking about how the volume of submission keeps increasing.

So personally, that is a wonderful thing because it's more reading for me, but it also means I have more chances of matching with authors.

I consider it a privilege to review queries on Books with Hooks, and of course, in my submissions inbox.

But at the same time, I talk to writers who tell me that they wish agents would read more than a few pages because...

I quote my story gets better in chapter two I have to be honest this kills me it's like me wanting chocolate chip cookies to have the nutritional value of kale it's just not realistic like it or not no agent