CeCe Lyra

She keeps trying to post and edit a video so she can post and have views.

But we know that, you know, she's not doing a really good job with her views.

And her boyfriend keeps talking and she's not paying attention to him.

And then she does start paying attention to him.

And he says, yeah, well, I think we need to, you know, save, save money.

We've been spending too much money.

It's, you know, I do it, you do it.

Let's talk about it.

And she's thinking to herself, oh my God, not this again.

Like they've had this conversation again, a million times.

And she's like, look, I don't want to do that.

I don't want to live a small life.

And yeah, maybe one day we'll start a family.

Kids are good content, but you know, I, I really want a big thriving, fun life.

So yeah, that's essentially what happens.

I don't think it's starting in the right place.

I think that this author is falling prey to a very common mistake, which is my job is to give a before step shot.

You know, before the inciting incident, what does my protagonist's life look like?

And so she picked a typical day.

I understand the impulse.