CeCe Lyra
👤 SpeakerAppearances Over Time
Podcast Appearances
It has a point of view.
It has perspective.
It is incredibly well-written.
Like all the applause.
Chapter one's not working.
The melody chapter is not working.
Here's the deal.
There's two possibilities for this.
Possibility number one, CC problem.
CC needs messy.
CC needs more depth.
Cece needs psychological acuity.
Cece talks about herself in the third person.
Fine.
If that's it, ignore me.
But if your vision for this is something that's a bit more upmarket, something with more teeth, a story that will, you know, have potential for book clubs and start conversations.
And I think the Melody chapter, I wonder, this is something that happens in dual POV novels.
The author wants us to sympathize with one character more, like one character more, imprint on one character more.
So she holds back on the other one, you know, thinking, yay, that doesn't work.
I need to be fascinated by both POVs.