Liu Na uses the idea of “leaving space” in poetry to teach Junxi how to write more refined short video copy.短视频文案的留白 - Leaving Space in Short Video Copy [HSK 3]Download the app here:Chinese Short Dialogue | App StoreChinese Short Dialogue | Google PlayAvailable in 8 languages on the app:Chinese Listening | 중국어 리스닝 | 中国語リスニング | Аудирование по китайскому языку | Nghe tiếng Trung | Mendengarkan bahasa Mandarin | Escucha en chino | การฟังภาษาจีน | Chinesisches Hören | Écoute du chinois | Ascolto cinese | Audição em chinês | चीनी सुनना | الاستماع إلى اللغة الصينية《English Translation》刘娜: Junxi, your copy is already very clear, but it can still feel more refined.俊熙: How can it be more refined? Does it need to be longer?刘娜: Not necessarily. You can learn from the poetic idea of “leaving space”: write a little less and leave some room.俊熙: What does leaving space mean?刘娜: It means not saying everything completely, so the audience can fill in the feeling themselves.俊熙: Then if I used to write, “This coffee shop’s coffee tastes great,” how could I change it?刘娜: You could write: “This sip is just right.”俊熙: Wow, it’s short, but it really creates an image.刘娜: Exactly. For another example, with a night view, you could write: “When the wind blows, the lights come on.”俊熙: I get it: say a little less, but create more atmosphere.

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