老外来了：托福119分，他用三招，教你写出完美英文句子！

主播：Jerry I翩翩配乐： Wonderful world----Sam Cooke关注公众号：一席文化，发送关键词：修改句子，领取逐字稿！Today’s topic:How to make a sentence better?在之前的节目中，我们讲到，is,am, are是弱爆的词，要将弱势句（passive sentences）变为生动句（active sentence）。这一期节目，我们给大家三条黄金法则，用上它们，你的句子定会文采斐然，熠熠生辉！Rule 1：使用形容词和副词！She sing→(Beautiful )Mary sings (happily).*给she一个名字，并选一个形容词描述she；*给动词加副词，描述怎样唱。Rule2：Add details 加细节怎么加“细节”？超简单——— 5w1h 原则！5W=who ,what ,when ,where, why1H=howBeautiful Mary sings happily.→(During midnight),beautiful Mary sings happily (in the magic forest)( to wake the scary dragon).在午夜时分，美丽的Mary在魔法森林里开心地唱歌，想要唤醒可怕的龙。3.Change weak words to stronger words 将弱势词变为强有力的词使用stronger words能直接呈现出一个scene（场景）。1）同样表示“说”，你只说“say”吗？Say是一个极为笼统的词汇，下面的词能展现一幅图片，所以是stronger words（强有力的词）Assert，Claim，Exclaim，Whisper，Explain，Announce2）同样地，go也是笼统词汇，下面这些强有力的词(stronger words)表示go更具体Run，Transport，Walk，Move，Gallop，CrawlPractice：①Nena goes to school.(Grumpy ) Nena，(an eight old years girl),(unfortunately )goes to (a private) school (through a bus)( every day).②Jerry teaches.(Every Saturday ) (muscular) Jerry ( passionately ) educates (English ) (at ASeat) ( to 3rd grade students) ( because he enjoys being with kids).Homework你英语老师喊你做作业啦！使用改写句子的3条黄金法则，请给下面这个句子化化妆，使其变成一个熠熠生辉的句子。I go to the park.

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