Carly Waters
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680 appearances
2 recordings
1 series
first heard Jul 2026
last heard 6 Jul
Carly Waters’s voice in public audio — every appearance, attributed to the second.
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I kind of went back a few times.
I was like, okay, don't see Caroline mentioned at all.
assuming she's a friend you know a really close friend as we said but then once we get to the point where they're having conversations and dialogue where they seemingly don't know that much about each other if they don't know the last time she talked to her sister how close are these people then I was thinking oh is Caroline somebody who is a fan of the podcast and just wants to come to this like retreat okay that's a different vibe like no idea who Caroline is so we just need a lot more clearer markers here
And it could be both.
It could be a friend who also loves the podcast and wants to come back for the weekend.
But again, as Cece's already pointed out, which I'm not going to belabor,
This is all the stuff that we need to figure out in interiority, which is crucial.
So I just think there was some opportunities on the first page to really kind of drill down on what you're trying to accomplish here.
And I just pointed out to a line I really liked, you know, a year ago, Bowie would have bet real money that ghost roots would become a hobby.
Her sister abandoned after college.
She still can't comprehend how Amber amassed thousands of fans willing to pay for a weekend vacation.
at the old rake house.
I loved that.
That was very establishing.
I would have liked it on the first page just so we can, again, can kind of understand a little bit more of the stakes of this.
Cause I just felt like the dialogue, as I said, leave something to be discovered.
And if we can't nail that dialogue, then we need to move that piece up.
And I've made notes throughout the pages of, you know, I was like, this is a really good line.
This is a really good line.
You know, something that really stood out to me was, um,
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