CeCe Lira
speaker
364 appearances
1 recordings
1 series
first heard May 2026
last heard 7 May
CeCe Lira’s voice in public audio — every appearance, attributed to the second.
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Okay.
These opening pages I felt were really strong.
The first line is excellent.
Like absolutely excellent.
It was...
halfway through the summer when Bitsy disappeared.
Like, it's short, it's simple, there's an inherent mystery, there's specificity, it's not over-explaining.
I really, really liked it.
That being said, and I fully agree it's a sneaky prologue, which is fine, but I'm not entirely clear on what the author's trying to accomplish with the use of we.
So the third paragraph has a very clear I in the beginning.
I leaned back on the cushion.
And then every other sentence is we sat and marveled.
We were completely absorbed.
We lost ourselves in the spectacle.
None of that even entered our minds.
Who is this collective we and collective our?
Is she trying to do a Greek chorus situation where she's talking about the community?
If so, then lean into that.
Don't start with an I and all of a sudden switch to we because it's very jarring.
I actually think it would be stronger if you leaned into the I though.
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