In this episode, I look at the first page of a listener's story and suggest ways they could improve it. I cover show, don't tell, close third-person, what details you choose to focus on, and when to start your story. My book The Game Changers: How Playing Games Changed the World and Can Change You Too is available in shops & here: uk.bookshop.org/p/books/the-game-…ean=9781805301349 Support the show via my ko-fi page here: www.ko-fi.com/timclare Join the Death Of 1000 Cuts Discord community here: https://discord.gg/Gr7nNU3jjv
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3ª PARTE | 17 DIC 2025 | EL PARTIDAZO DE COPE
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